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Title: After Such Knowledge
(The entities are awakened with some deep reaction, an inner glow, and speak as one.)
Voices: From where do you know those words, Presumptor?
(Chax trembles in the throes of great emotion, and towards the end of his speech he starts to weep.)
Chax: I heard them in a dream where I perceived you.
If it was a mere dream delusion, then please guide and correct me.
If they are your words but I am not meant to hear them, then it is your privilege to end my Name, if I am irremediably contaminated by them.
But If they indeed come from you in the end… what am I to think?
How am I henceforth to do what is right, to fight to protect Botaram, after such knowledge?
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Recess – Planning Sketch


Botaram is usually composed start to finish in Illustrator. However, when no computer is handy, I take notes with what’s available. This sketch was drawn on a placemat at the Morristown Diner in early September of 2006. It constitutes very rough layout notes and dialogue for entry 5, “On Deeds”. I apologize for my atrocious handwriting.

This is the entry where I decided on Aun’s name. He appears as “Aut” here, which could mean anything, and I suppose that’s why I changed it. While composing the entry in Illustrator, I decided that something else needed to happen in the background, so I quickly made a flying critter to land on the tree. This is how the khirrik was born, and at the time I had no idea how important it would later become to the story.

In the last panel, Chax reminds me a bit of New Jersey.

Recess


I apologize for interrupting the story at this point, which will leave both Chax and the reader in suspense, but I need to take a short break from Botaram to refresh my mind and work on a few story matters.

I will continue to post small updates of Botaram-related content on schedule; these may take the form of notes, drafts, text updates, rough scribbles like the one above, or answers to reader questions. If you wish to ask a question, please leave a comment below, or send an email via the address on my profile page (also below). I expect to resume regular updates on September 8th.

Thank you very much for reading this story!